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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The first that I noticed was the obligatory reliance on black outlines. This may suit a graphic piece but when working with a more classic medium, it tends to give the impression that the artist can't express edges without hard lines.
The composition is okay as it nearly reaches all four edges. It's only 'okay' because the point of interest is centered in the dead center of the workspace. To fix this, I would have extended the neck and body out to the bottom right corner to convey a part of something bigger instead of a floating head in space.
The eye is humorous at first but ultimately detracts from a piece that looks like it was originally suppose to be a serious technical drawing.
All in all, keep painting Rowan. You're much better at it than you probably think you are.
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